My mom and father loved each other...
Till that one day, my mom found my father kissing some one else,and not only kissing...
Mom cried I could feel it...I ran to mom...
Hugged mom, yelled at father...
Father got up from the bed...
He tied to punch me, but I kicked him. How could I let him punch me?
Father fell down on the floor...(He got hurt how sad. SO NOT!)
I went to bed...
The next morning I woke up, went down the stairs to have some breakfast...
I found mom lying on the couch with a baby-belly...
16 comments:
And there you fooled us all into believing that you were writing a sweet and kind story about a happy family...
You're Evil, Little One.
I know!
wow, it is great... It is just be good I know you come from a good family with a good daddy, otherwise I would think otherwise, so good have you written it...
And the pictures are very good too... Whenever I am finally finished with my $%^$%^%&%^* pictures, I ask you for help instead of your mommy ;-)
:D lovely pictures and your writing is good as well!
And if you continue to write, you will feel more comfortable with your English, so don't give up and keep trying, you got lot of talent, and I'm happy you decided to join us in the writing.
Good Job!
I love your pictures, the way you mixed them was really cool!
And yes... I was tricked, I thought you said a Happy family :D lol lol
I tricked you!
And I said it was a Happy family! ;D
Awesome story - with great pictures.
I wish I could do that with my picture - even after Zayury's tutorial I still can't do it. lol owell.
Perhaps your mum is right...
You really have been taught well in the ways of evil - telling us it was going to be a happy story, with a happy family... I will have to watch out for you from now on.
:)
Great story, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
WOW! You really got me! Like everyone else I believed you about the 'happy family' lol! :D
FANTASTIC pictures and I love your sense of humor, "he got hurt how sad. SO NOT!" LOL! :D :D
Wonderful beginning my young friend, great job! :)
Thanks to all!
Very good Fran!!!! Excellent job. I would say short and sweet!!
But a great beginning!
And yes, you tricked me too!!!
HAppy family, sweet family. Then again, they don't hold anything back and hide anything from each other. So I could se them as being happy. LOL!!
Your pictures are wonderful too!!! I have to agree with Sam, I still can't do pictures like that...
Thank you!
Ooh - very promising. You're definitely following in your mother's footsteps. Your pictures are great! I'm very impressed. And happy families are great - I mean, we all want to part of one, right? But they're boring to read about. I'm glad this family has some issues. I look forward to see what's coming next. Great job!
Very good Fran! :D
I can't wait to see the next chapter! :D
Very good, I wonder what will happen now that a little one is comming. I think the father deserve a good scolding
Wow such a great story for just a 9 year old! Looking forward to the next part, got me wondering about what happened when she was asleep.
Very well done, Fran. I liked your story and your pictures. I especially liked the title picture. Very nice!
And any man that would try to hit a child, especially his own, deserves more than just a scolding!
Post a Comment