Ooops!!! I forgot to introduce myself and my family...Lets begin with me :
I am Areya, and my father sucks!
Next my sister :
Amaya is a little girl and kind...
Next My mom :Alma (I hate that name!)
Next my father :Almar, he sucks! (And I hate that name too!)
He's the biggest fu...er...sucker in the world!
I went to a nightclub to get out of the house...
I meet a girl, a teen like me...
We made friends...
We talked about my life,And about her life...
We danced...
"I have to go, you can come with me..." I said"why do you have to go?" she asked
"well, I'm hungry..." I answered
"But you can eat here..." she said
19 comments:
Oh this was a very cute chapter my dear! I love your pictures and your beautiful characters! :wub:
You are very funny, I like how you mentioned you hate the names or your little slip for sucker, lol!:D
Very well done my dear, keep up the good work! :D
Thank you! :D
I love this chapter even more than the first one, sweetie. :-)
That girl she met looks really nice, but are you sure she's really a girl?
No...
I did't ceak, you kuow?
You didn't check?
well, you should have... ROFL!
No!!! :lol:
I don't think I have the money to buy food...
Yayy! :D
I liked it! :D
I can't wait 'til the next part! :D
thanks!
I liked it too, Fran.
I was reading it and looking at the nice, clear pictures. And I was sat here thinking - that girl ain't a girl!
Areya is going to get a surprise when she finds out! lol
Very cute! I love the name Areya - pretty. She doesn't think much of her dad, does she? Your pictures are nice, beautiful effects. Did you do them yourself? My 11 year old son is just learning to use photoshop - he really likes it. Nice work - looking forward to the next chapter.
LOL just what Leah said, you picked a guy model for a girl, but other than that, you are doing great Fran and glad you kept us updated on your progress.
By the way great job on this story
Another great job Fran!!!!
I really like the way Areya expresses herself. And even her "slip of the tongue" humor!!
And just between you and me...you might want to check....hehehehehe.
Your pictures are really good, too!!!
Really fun chapter, I love Areya, she is unique and so frank! :D lol
Lovely character...
but I really think that girl is really a Guy and a cute one I must add..
You are so talented Fran! please keep it up, and I'm so sorry I'm late for this chapter, I didn't know it was out, so please let me know when you post a new chapter again!
Your pictures are great! Beautiful job, keep it up! Really nice Job!
Congrats!
A cute guy, and I think that of him!
I don't think that of Neil out moms story...
I thought that had to be a guy! LOL!
Maybe she's/he's the one who needs to check herself/himself! LOL!!!
This story is great! It will be most interesting to read what happens next...
So here I go! :)
WTF!
This was the most ridiculous thing I've ever read... I have no idea how you people could be replying with AWESOME! AND GREAT! ....
My 5 year old daughter could write a more elaborate story than this
Hey Ashley...could your 5 year old do it in a second language?
NO??
Didn't think so.
Try again and don't be so rude. Especially towards a child.
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